Wow, Julien was a very forward guy to kiss her. I think I'll just make a few comments here and there about the chapters I've read. I would like to comment on every chapter, but I'm not going to. I love the Chateau where the grandparents live. I don't want to give to much away, but here are a few thoughts. You're right about Sky too! She is already her Daddy's girl! Sharlee already told Christian that they could not be friends for that very reason! When I originally thought of that scene, I'd intended for Alissa to be home, but I forgot about that when I actually wrote it! Thanks for making me remember. Noah didn't lose his temper! His sessions with Sarge are really paying off and he also had Sharlee and his baby in mind. I thought that it was time to learn more about Alissa's family on her mother's side. I like how you added the little bit of Skylar picking up on her daddy and his uneasiness. She should not communicate with him since Noah can't stand him and since she knows Christian's intentions! If there was a guy trying to get me attention in that way and my boyfriend didn't like him, I would not keep being friendly with the other guy. ![]() Aww great chapter! I'm glad Alissa and Crystal got some good news! And ugh stinking Christian showing up again! I'm glad Noah didn't lose his temper but Christian should really back off, especially coming over when Dale and Noah weren't supposed to be home! Sharlee should know better.
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